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The Timeline Predicament


Two points are involved, perhaps more in the end, with getting this timeline together. The first of which was deciding how much time should pass before it was believable the first war occurred. As mentioned before, this world is not an Adam and Eve like society where it started with two people and from those two people all of mortal kind stems. The first conflict is between two races of people; the Sylvan, the children of Danu, and the Sidhe, the children of Erebh. The Sidhe are in essence created in secret and hidden from the rest of the world, so their procreation can be watched and managed with absolute care. With that evil kept secret, the other races can be watched as well, though not in the same way. Regardless, there is nothing hampering their procreation. And since they are not like Adam and Eve, they are placed in numerous places within each world, to grow in many realms. So, with roughly 150 years, I hope it is believable but I still wonder.

The next point of worry is the statement in the story that, within the world of Demeteria, the Ageless Empire lasted for 1,000 years. So I have to struggle into stretching the timeline out to make it believable for a few hundred years of history prior to the Empire’s rise, a few hundred years after for the unification of the Elves into their new nation, and the final lead in to the current timeline of the story in Repeating History. Once I have the elven part of the timeline fleshed out, I’ll have to work on the human end again, and fix their end to match the Elf timeline, but that will, in the end, include pretty much doubling the content I already have there, which will be rough. And then of course, there’s the nearly 2,000 years of Dwarven civil conflict that weaves in and out of it, and blends with both human and elven histories. Both Elven and Dwarven are in the works at the moment, but I will be focusing on the Elves first.

DwarfTimelineWIP ElfTimelineWIP

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Timeline: The First War Ever


The First War Ever is basically a lead in to the Last War Ever. Biblical implications abound. Well, to put it plainly, one of the creators disliked what was done in creation, and felt he could do better, so he made his own creation, and in fact if you look at it clearly, he does do at the very least the same thing, on his own.

The first war is a multi-positioned war, pitting the Dwarves, Humans, and Sylvan against the Giants and the Sidhe. It does not simply take place on one world, but across an entire cosmos, and I am endeavoring to cover the timeline of this event through each world’s perspective. The only constant between each world is the Giants are sealed in arcane slumber, the Sylvan and Sidhe fight each other to a unified extinction, Humans lose their knowledge of magic, and then, life carries on in its different ways depending on the world in question.

The Sylvan wrote two “biblical” texts amidst the worlds, called the Tome of Wisdom and the Tome of Truth. One tells of the events of creation and one tells of their perceived prophecy of their demise, but also of their endeavors to stop it. I haven’t written these texts out. I mean, I don’t think I could hold to Blizzard’s means of writing prophecy much less biblical level.

And, at the End of Days, Wisdom shall be lost
as Justice falls upon the world of men.
Valor shall turn to Wrath
and all Hope will be swallowed by Despair.
Death, at last, shall spread its wings over all
as Fate lies shattered forever.

And, at the End of Days,
the first sign shall appear in the Heavens.
Justice shall fall upon the world of men.
The armies of Light and Shadow
shall clash across the fields of eternity.

I have some ideas regarding … unique names or titles that could be twisted into euphemism and metaphor, but to write something like this, I doubt I ever could make it seem as poetic or prophetic; the kind of thing the people in the story would spend decades, centuries, lifetimes debating its meaning.

And of course, I still debate with whether or not the years are believable enough for my timeline. As promised, here’s some shots of what I have so far regarding the beginning of the world and its first war.

BeginningTimeline DemSylSidheWar

 

 

 

 

 

 

Demeteria is one of my worlds, and so this is the timeline for how the first war played out, in general view, there, as well as the general beginning timeline that affects all worlds in the cosmos. You’ll see my Elven Calendar in use in the timeline. See this post for my developing of that calendar.

 

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Timey Whimy Liney Whiny


Here comes the shocker, I know nothing about Dr. Who. Just have friends who say Timey Whimy a lot, so I’ve picked it up.

Anyway, onto seriousness. As I’ve mentioned, I worked on some World Building stuff through Writing.com, and of that stuff, a Timeline was a part of it. I had always wanted to build up a time line, to show specifically the past events I mention of the history of Haven in my writing. However, with working on the timeline I looked, of course, at things that also pre-date Haven and things that have nothing to do with the Human’s regions of the worlds. However, I did work on Haven’s history mostly for the purposes of the Writing.com class and preparation in world building.

I got 640 years into the history of Haven, when I stared at a single line of the timeline and my jaw dropped. The line was simply … “Elena Outridge is born.” Now, why is that a problem. Well, I mentioned this on my tumblr site, so those that watch there are going to see it again, but now that I’m trying to force myself to be more adamant about blogging, I have this site and tumblr linked up so that both display the same post as I make them, mainly to reach more people, but also to see just how many people see it. Is my tumblr site getting more attention or this one?

Well, anyway, another character in my story mentions that a specific empire lasted for 1,000 years. So, not reaching 1,000 years yet was one problem. The other problem was that Elena is in the same story. She’s of a long-living race, so it’s not an issue if she lives to be 400+ years old, but she’s supposed to still be young when she meets Alek, the main character of that story where it is mentioned the empire lasted for 1,000 years. With that being said, it is not just a matter of reaching the year 1,000, because obviously, the world was not created with an empire in power, not the empire had to rise to power. And how long does that take? How long does it take for the people placed on the world in the moment of creation to reach a population capable of waging war on each other? So it’s possible I’m looking at not just reaching 1,000, but adding 1,000 years to the timeline. With the thought of adding 1,000 years in between what I already had for Haven came to me, I had a moment of lost enthusiasm and motivation to continue.

However, I’m still at it. I have taken my focus off of Haven though. The Empire in question is an Empire forged by a group of Elves. It does not have any baring on the history of Haven, and the Elves were not at odds with the humans of Haven, but simply, one characters tells Alek, a human of Haven, about the empire the Elves had. It is part of his education and training to be a soldier, so it is something I need to flesh out since he will be learning about it. The first thing I did was look at creation and that question I asked just a moment ago. How long would it take for the people of creation to grow into civilizations large enough to wage war upon each other? This is not an Adam & Eve style creation, because there are more than just humans in my worlds. There’s Humans, Dwarves, Elves, Orcs, Trolls, Dragons, and various other minor races. More importantly, the Elves and Dwarves are divided into subcategories or subspecies based upon certain things. For the Dwarves, they are divided among the different forms of stone and mineral that they come from. Elves are divided among the different terrain styles or terrain fixtures where they live. Thus, there are Iron Dwarves, Stone Dwarves, Obsidian Dwarves, etc. and Forest Elves, Sand Elves, Snow Elves, etc. So, these worlds follow a multiple Adam & Eve style of creation. There are multiple locations, or centers of civilization, where two of each are placed. Even without only two people being the beginning, there was still the wonder of how fast these groups could grow. I wagered 100 years, and pushed that first war back an extra 100 years than I had previously. Then, from the end of that war, I followed from there and began the history of the Elves and the Ageless Empire.

It is going slowly, as coming up with 1,000+ years of history is daunting to say the least. Especially about a group I had never made any specifics about except in regards to their fall. However, I did add a couple facts to work with when I made the calendar I mentioned in a previous post. Two of the months are, like in the Gregorian Calendar, named for two figures in regards to Elven History. Where in the Gregorian it is July named for Julius Caesar and August named for Augustus Caesar, I have Hyandime and Raenime named for Raenir ael’Sylvere, the man who led the Gray Elf Nation that would become the Ageless Empire when he finally drove the Orcs away, and Hyandur Silverleaf, the man who had united the various Elven sub-races into a unified nation after the Ageless Empire’s fall had scattered them. For now, I focus on the Empire’s rise, as I have not even reached that point yet.

In the next post about timelines, I will share some screenshots of what I’m working on, as I fill my head up with names that will live and die in the space of 20 lines of text, perhaps.

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The Blogging Game


Anyone who still, or ever did, read this is most likely aware that I lack … well, something, in keeping up. I have never been one to talk much, in person, unless it specifically related to something I was interested in. i.e. my nerdy desires. Even with that being the topic, I have never been one that easily initiates conversation. I keep a lot of what I want to say in even among fellow nerds because of insecurities. I don’t think that comes as a surprise either. I have more ease talking to myself, and I do it a lot. It’s like I have no inner monologue, and so I just start talking to myself about an idea that pops into my head. I delineate through multiple tangents that spawn off that original idea. And then, I forget it all. I have, in the past taken to recording myself when I do talk to myself, but I tend to get some thoughts out before I remember to start recording, and then once I do record, I notice that my thoughts become slower and that I don’t go through as much tangent as I would have done otherwise. I can’t explain it.

Anyway, as I have said before, I’m going to try and get back into this, and keep updates on my ideas, on my work, and hope that one day, I’ll have the motivation and energy to finally finish one of my millions of story ideas. I hope to include the notes I’ve been making towards my world building ideas and hope to include some of the recordings, perhaps, of myself talking to myself. Doubt it will be interesting, but I feel I need feedback. I need someone’s comments, ideas on my ideas, compliment or criticism, because I want to get something published eventually. Even if it doesn’t rake in tons of money, I want to get something published.

So, this is one post, and I’m going to be looking into putting together some sort of … queue, or schedule of posts for the blog, and hopefully get this working towards a positive result.

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Nano and WDC


Nanowrimo is around the corner, and I shall indeed be taking part again. Not sure exactly what I’m going to work on this time, but, I would like to take the time to expound upon my recent endeavors towards urging my writing along.

I signed up on Writing.com a year ago, but never really looked at it beyond the first few visits. I forget what caused me to drift from it, but I did. Recently, I looked back, and got involved with a group on the site called World In Progress. They have these little courses designed to help a writer work on their characters, world, and other related topics towards strengthening their writing’s background. i.e. all that unwritten stuff that pretty much just exists in the writer’s head so they can write the story itself and make it more believable.

Well, I took their Character Creative, Timeline Technique, and Wonders of World Building classes. I’m going to look into the Ethnicity as well, just for the hell of it, but the point I wanted to make was…. I ventured away from using Fractal Mapper, and other programs, and looked into a video about building a map on Photoshop. I don’t have photoshop, but used gimp, and used what is available there to emulate what was done with the video, and I think I like how it came out there MUCH more than how it came out in the other programs. Not only did I make Verdania look better than on previous images, but I mapped out the other continents of the world of Demeteria, and am in the process of working on Arvandor as well. So, here we are, my map of Demeteria’s land masses.

Demeteria

 

 

 

 

 

My only dislike for this image, is the lack of ability to zoom in on specific regions of the map and put in more detail. It only comes up with a blurred, larger form of the area when I zoom in, even while I was working on it. So, even though I like how this turned out, I am still thinking of trying again if I ever get Campaign Cartographer 3.

This was not all I worked on, I made character sheets for a couple characters, and will continue to do others for other characters, but more importantly, I started work on a time line. I’ve hit a snag around the year 640, for the kingdom of Haven, not liking how I haven’t reached the year 1000 yet, and have already gotten certain events into the timeline. I’m going to switch my focus to the Elves, and work on their portion of the timeline, and see if I can stretch things out so that it at least exceeds 1,000 years, because I do have bits in the story already that refer to an event having happened 1,000 years ago, so the timeline won’t be complete anytime soon, but it is at least started and I’m working on it, which I had no idea how to start prior to this class. All thanks to Minara, GoldenAmber, and Robyn Sparks, the teachers & leaders of this group on Writing.Com.

My name on Writing.Com is the same as my Nano name, in case anyone wants to check me out: VerdaniaMan.

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Elven Currency Pt. 2


So, after writing the other post about currency, I got to thinking about what the coins would look like. Other than a circular shape and the color of their respective metals, I thought about the different leaves that would be used to decorate the individual coins to give another bit of a look to represent their value, especially since there’s more than one coin for each type of metal.

Per – Beech Tree leaf, simple oval shape, no serrations or parts.
Mir – Water Birch leaf, oval shaped with serrated “teeth” along the edges.
Uru – Alder leaf, tear drop shaped, serrated edges.
Eneg – Ash leaf, ellipse shaped with pointed ends, no serration.
Paen – Rowan leaf, long oval shaped leaf, rounded ends, minor serration.
Telem – Apple leaf, rounded, semi oval shaped leaf, pointed end, no serration.
Síla – Grape leaf, large three pointed, circular shaped leaf, minor serration.
Pery – Horse Chestnut leaf, 5 parted, oval shaped leaves, no serrations.
Col – Maple leaf, the royal symbol, 3 pointed leaf, no serrations.
Mall – Maple leaf, the royal symbol, 5 pointed leaf, no serrations.
Airi – Green Poplar leaf, three serrated, smooth tip lobes.
Carar – Ivy leaf, three pointed lobes, no serration.
Celer – Oak leaf, multi-pointed lobes, no serration.
Ithil – Fig leaf, five lobed, round tipped, minor serration.
Laur – Hemlock leaf, multi-pointed, tiny leaves forming larger three-pointed leaf shape, minor serration.
Macal – Leather leaf Fern, a cluster of tiny oval leaves close together and connected upon a fern branch.

I’m sure I could have done better with some of them, but I could no longer think of any leaves that seemed like they could fit.

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Elven Currency


Watching an episode of the Hercule Poirot mysteries, I was encouraged to look into information about old currencies. Specifically, a scene regarding the “absurdity” of a six shilling (72 pence) charge for a chunk of meat (during post WWII times) prompted me to look into the set up of the old English currency, and from there, I looked into others, like the ancient Greek drachma and the Roman denarius. This got me thinking about the currency the Elves would use in my stories. I decided to take a little of the Roman and English stuff and come up with my own names, and form the currency for the Elves, even if it’s only mentioned briefly in certain scenes of my writing. It helps me feel like it is all more alive in my head. Anyway….

The lowest form of the currency is a cent or pence equivalent, and since the majority of the Elves are generally a nature loving breed of people, I presumed that the names for these things should be based around nature. Thus, their cent is called a “Lasse” which means leaf. And under the pretense that there are many leaves on a Tree, their dollar, or pound, would be named for such, or “Ord.” Lastly, I felt, why stop there? Just as there are many leaves on a tree, there are many trees in a forest, and so there is a higher dollar, or pound, named thusly, or “Eryn.” Each individual coin I named to reflect some aspect of the material used to make such a coin. Sometimes, currency gains slang terms that become universally recognized and accepted. (i.e. buck being used to refer to the dollar, quid being used to refer to the pound)

Tel’Lasse (“The Leaf”), Tel’Orn (“The Tree”), & Tel’Eryn (“The Forest”)
Per – copper coin, Per are worth 1/2 of a Lasse. (also sometimes called a Tharn, “Twig”)
Mir – copper coin, Mir are the standard 1 Lasse coin. (A Leaf)
Uru – bronze coin, Uru are worth 3 Lasse.
Eneg – bronze coin, Eneg are worth 6 Lasse.
Paen – silver coin, Paen are worth 12 Lasse.
Telem – silver coin, Telem are worth 30 Lasse. (also sometimes called an Olb, “Branch”)
Síla – gold coin, Síla are worth 75 Lasse.
Pery – gold coin, Pery are worth 150 Lasse.
Col – Tamberil coin, Col are worth 300 Lasse, or 1 Orn. (A Tree)
Mall – Tamberil coin, Mall are worth 900 Lasse, or 3 Orn.
Airi – Gaeril coin, Airi are worth 1,800 Lasse, or 6 Orn.
Carar – Gaeril coin, Carar are worth 3,600 Lasse, or 12 Orn.
Celer – Mithril coin, Celer are worth 9,000 Lasse, or 30 Orn.
Ithil – Mithril coin, Ithil are worth 22,500 Lasse, or 75 Orn.
Laur – Maldaril coin, Laur are worth 45,000 Lasse, or 150 Orn.
Macal – Maldaril coin, Macal are worth 90,000 Lasse, 300 Orn, or 1 Eryn. (A Forest)

And now, a little information on the metals. Mithril did not only feature in the Tolkien universe of stories around Middle-Earth, but in other fantasy realms. According to dictionaries compiled from Tolkien’s writing, Mithril means “shining gray” and is used to refer to true-silver, perhaps platinum. I felt why should silver be the only one. So I came up with Tamberil and Maldaril as copper and gold equivalents to that idea. The idea of bronze coins comes from the roman currency system. Oddly, there is no word for bronze in Tolkien’s Elvish languages. I used Gaer for the sparkling bronze equivalent, because it has to do with the color of copper, which is as close to bronze as I can find among the dictionaries. It means red and ruddy, more than copper, so… take what you can get. Anyway, there we have it.

Obviously, the coins would also be carved into the shapes of leaves, perhaps with some green worked in with the metals, to make them look more like leaves.

Anyway, this is only the currency for the Elves, and could be the same for Elves from Arvandor as well as Demeteria, as the designs carved on the leaves themselves could specify which world they’re from, as opposed to the leaf design aspects. Like with other coins, marks of the monarchs could be on one side, while the other side bore the mark of the leaf and perhaps some structure or saying. I’ll be working on currency ideas for the other groups of peoples within each story in time as well though.

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